First draft
I have decided to include a weather update as a part of my second page because this is something which people are generally interested in. Also there is two adverts which are going to be about a restaurant and a bar opening soon because of interest my target audience has in this subject. The article involving universities is essential because of the target audience of my newspaper will either be in university or looking to go to university and the article will help them in making the correct choice.
Second draft
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The colours I have incorporated into this page are masculine colours which fits the target audience of young males and also the colours red and grey are colours i have used on my first page which shows signs of continuity.
Third Draft
It is evident from this draft that I have used far more text than on the front page I have added short paragraphs which state what the article is going to be about which i used from looking at my style model which is the Daily Mail which also uses this technique. All i have left to do now is add in the photos I have taken which will complete my second page
Fourth Draft
In this draft I have added in the photos which I took using a Dolby digital camera of Liverpool hope university and bars which are around my local area. these pictures will interest my readers as they are places they will know well.
Final Draft
For my final draft significant changes have been made, such as adding an additional column at the top of the page next to the weather section were I indicate the horoscopes and other puzzles available inside the newspaper. Also i have changed the story in the bottom left hand corner from the new wetherspoons to an article about a new sans buries which is under construction and lastly I have added an article at the bottom of the page called the 'Redknapp review' were a former Liverpool player has his own column talking about the club.
